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Monday, June 13, 2011

Paragraph Contrast II

The Twins 
Fero and Fera are twins, but they are very different. Fero is a tomboyish girl and short haired. While Fera is feminine girl and long-haired. Their skin color was different, Fero more black than Fera. As a kid, Fera like to play dolls and other games girl, Fero prefer flying kites and other games boy better than games girl. Another thing that is different from them is Fero most like to wear T-shirts, jeans, hats, sneakers, and looking cool. But Fera is very fashionable, she always wore dresses, headbands, or hair clips and high hells. Fero like rhythmic rock songs, but Fera like romantic songs.. Fera was more intelligent than Fero. But Fero more concerned about the environment compared to Fera. Fera would rather help her parents compared to Fero. Although they are very different, but they always get along and always support each other. That Fera and Fero twins but different.

1 comment:

  1. i think the point is clear about contrast but your structure have an wrong.but that all ;f your paragraph is good


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